观点类大作文，教育类话题
Nowadays, some people think the city is no longer a good place for children, they suggest that the country is a better choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
1、题目大意
如今，有些人认为城市不再是适合孩子们的好地方，他们建议乡村是更好的选择. 你是否同意？
2、思路解析
这是一道观点类大作文，城市和乡村哪个更适合孩子。题目理解上不难，审题时注意三个点，一是“good place”并没有给出明确定义，因此在讨论中可以给出明确解释；二是题目包含了比较关系，需要讨论“city”和“country”哪个更好，而不是单纯讨论各自好处；三是限定对象“children”，只讨论针对孩子的影响，无需讨论成年人等情况。下面月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。
首先来看农村更好的原因，有两方面。
一是农村相较于城市环境污染更少。现代城市中由于人口及车辆过多、绿化太少，往往伴随着空气污染和噪音污染，这些不利于孩子的健康成长，而乡村则拥有更好的空气质量，对于孩子的健康会更好。
二是农村拥有更好的自然环境。孩子在农村更有机会接触农作物、各种花草树木以及动物，他们能直观的了解大自然，感受大自然与人之间的关系。这种体验和机会在城市中是很难获得的。
然后来看城市所具备的优势，有三方面。
一是城市拥有更好的教育资源。相较于农村而言，大城市往往拥有更好的学校、更优秀的老师以及教学相关的配套设施，这些能帮助孩子更好地学习以及掌握更多的知识内容。即使孩子想要学习艺术等领域，在城市中也更容易找到合适的老师。
二是城市拥有更完善的基础设施，包括科技馆、博物馆、水族馆等等。这些场所能丰富孩子的课余生活、提升孩子在不同领域的见识、培养孩子的人文素养，如果在乡村这样的机会会少很多。
三是孩子在城市中可能拥有更多的发展机会，鉴于城市相较于农村往往拥有更多的教育、基础建设、科技、资本等优势，这意味着孩子在城市中生活会拥有更多的外部优势，这些优势使得他们在成长的过程中有更多的选择机会，进而累积成一种发展优势。
3、提纲
4、高分范文示例
The issue of child growth, especially in their living surroundings has drawn public attention, with one view stating that the countryside is a more suitable place for them than the city. However, I have an opposing view.
From education perspective, urban schools own advanced facilities which are regarded as one of the most significant factors to elementary education. Compared with rural classrooms, urban ones are equipped with multimedia, such as projectors, computers, etc., helping pupils acquire knowledge vividly and effectively. Besides, other facilities, including music rooms and libraries provide extra-course knowledge to those who have keen interest in these. On the contrary, those especially from remote areas have less access to related knowledge, preventing them from future success.
In addition, children in cities have more opportunities to visit museums and art galleries, widening their horizons and enriching social knowledge. National History Museum can offer an overview of the whole country, which means that children can learn abundant knowledge about this. Besides, artists’ paintings hanging in art galleries stimulate children’s imagination and interest in painting. In contrast, lack of social resources becomes a barrier to rural children’s development.
Granted, the benefits from the natural environment in countryside could not be denied. Unlike cities, there is less air, water or noise pollution in countryside. However, joint efforts are being made by both citizens and authorities to improve urban living environment, which narrows the gap between the two areas.
In conclusion, although children can live in the natural environment in countryside, high-qualified teaching facilities and rich social resources both guide them into future success.
范文作者：CB
5、相关词汇和语法结构
projector 投影仪
Art gallery 艺术画廊
high-qualified 高质量的
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