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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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1、题目大意

下面的图表提供了澳大利亚某城镇年轻人目前参加的舞蹈课程的地点和类型信息。通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息，并在相关情况下进行比较。

2、高分范文示例

The pie chart presents data on where young people in an Australian town are taking dance classes, and the bar graph shows the different types of dance classes they are enrolled in. Overall, most lessons are held in private studios, and there is an inverse relationship between the younger and older age groups in terms of their participation in different dance genres.

Looking first at the locations of the classes, private studios topped the list at 48%. This was followed by school auditoriums and community venues with 24% and 18%, respectively. The lowest proportion was held in collegiate centres, at a significantly lower 10%.

Turning to the class genres, ballet had the highest number of younger students, at 600, and the lowest number of older students, with just under 300. Conversely, contemporary dance had the highest number of older dancers, at over 500, but only 300 younger participants. Tap dancing had slightly more of the younger group than the older group, at approximately 450 and 425, respectively.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Private studios私人工作室

School auditoriums学校礼堂

Community venues社区场所

Collegiate centres大学中心

Dance genres舞蹈种类

Younger students年轻学生

Older students年长学生

Inverse relationship逆向关系

Enrolled in报名参加

Proportion比例