2022年5月托福独立写作题目示范回答公布!

来了!来了!可算盼来了——本周在家考托福独立写作题目!

新鲜出炉哦!

今天就来帮同学们分析一下这道题目,并给大家提供一个示范回答。

下面我们就来一起看看题目吧!

5.29-6.2在家考独立写作题目:

Many people feel homesick (have minor feelings of sadness because they are missing their home) when they travel to a new place. Imagine that you have the opportunity to travel to a new place and stay in that community for several months.

If you felt homesick, which ONE of the following do you believe would be most useful in helping you feel less sad about missing your home? Why?

1. Doing activities or eating foods that remind you of home

2. Maintaining contact with people from home

3. Trying activities or foods that are special to your new community

4. Making friends in your new community

题目分析

这道题重复了2021年6月6日-6月10日托福 在家考的题目。

根据题目的内容和结构我们可以看出,这是一道四选一的生活态度类题目。

这道题的题干相对来说比较长,因此同学们在读题的时候一定要看清楚题目条件,但是它给出的选项比较多,相对来说还是比较好思考论点的。

我们先从题干入手分析,这道题目的关键在于homesick,题目中也对这个名词也给出了解释,我们在可以把这个词理解为思乡。

题目问的是四个选项中的哪一个最能够帮助你缓解这种思乡的情绪,那同学们可以把这四个选项和家乡联系起来,再去谈为什么能够帮助你缓解这样的情绪,可以从产生思乡情绪的原因入手进行思考。

要特别注意,一定要说具体的感受和体会,不要出现因为这个活动可以让我的思想情绪缓解,所以我选择它这样的问题,举例的时候也要具体,点出具体的活动、物品或者人。

下面再来看选项,第一个选项是做或者吃一些能让你想起家乡的活动或者食物,这种具有两个主语的选项,我们可以进行分情况讨论,就是活动和食物。

如果选择这个选项,我们可以说这些活动能让我们想起在家乡的时光(remind us of the time when were in our hometown),因此我们可以想到曾经陪伴我们做这些活动的人,从而获得归属感(a sense of belonging);

也可以说这些食物是家乡的一个代表(a symbol of hometown),因此在吃的时候会想起属于家乡的味道(the taste that belongs to hometown)。

再来说第二个选项,和家乡的人保持联系。这个选项我们可以说可以和这些人聊天(chat with them),这样我们可以得到一些心理上的安慰(mental comfort);

也可以说我们可以了解到家里发生的事(things happened in hometown),这样我们就能感受到自己还是家里的一部分(a part of home),只是暂时性离开(temporary departure)。

第三个选项是做或者吃一些你所在的新社区的活动或食物,这里我们可以和第一个选项进行对比考虑,可以说这些活动可以让我们更快的融入新的环境(adapt to the new environment faster),这样我们就可以迅速创建自己的社交圈(create a new social circle)从而把思想情绪抛在脑后(leave the homesick behind one’s back);

还可以说这些食物可以给人带来新的味觉体验(brand new taste experience),这样人们可以获得幸福感(a sense of happiness)。

最后是在你所在的新社区交新朋友,这里可以和第二个选项对比来看,可以说这些新朋友可以随时随地陪伴你(accompany you whenever and wherever you want),这样你就不会感到孤独(will not feel lonely),这样也不会产生思乡情绪(will not generate the sense of homesick);

也可以说这些朋友会帮助你更好的适应新的城市和生活(help you to adapt the new city and life),这样你在工作和生活上都能够得心应手(do things with facility),坏情绪就不会产生(will not produce bad emotions)。

段落示范:

To begin with, those new activities allow me to adapt to the new environment faster. Imagine that if I could participate in each activity held by the community, I could make thousands of friends quickly. It means that I could create a new social circle, which can help me to forget the homesick.

Actually, I still vividly remember that three years ago, when I first moved to Beijing, a totally strange city, I went to every single activity that invited me without any hesitation, like my classmates’ birthday party and the hip-hop dance club activities.

As a result, I got to know almost everyone in our grade and even some senior schoolmates. They helped me a lot in my future study life. Every time I stayed with them, their companionship helped me to left all of the homesick behind my back.

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