组合图类雅思小作文怎么写?

今天,我来教大家怎么写组合图类雅思小作文

老规矩,以下是正文目录:

1,题目

2,高分范文

3,范文朗读

4, 范文地道词汇中英对照,包括:

  • 雅思小作文高分句型

  • 高分地道词汇和短语

  • 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语

  • 组合图小作文写作技巧

题目:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

雅思小作文组合图,高分作文这样写

高分范文

(1)The line graph shows the average daily amount of electricity used for both winter and summer for UK households; while the pie chart contrasts the proportions of electricity used in four categories of household appliances.

Overall, residences in winter used over double the amount of daily electricity used in summer; however, the patterns for both seasons were similar, (2)with heating, including that for water, ranking highest for electricity usage.

From about 9:30 at night to midnight, electricity use declines in winter, and this also remains true for summer, though this drop begins about an hour and a half later. In winter, however, electricity consumption begins to pick up again and sees its morning high point at 3 am, using 40,000 units, and thereafter gradually decreases, so that by 9 am it will have fallen by a further 10, 000 units. Summer, on the other hand, only registers a decline of about 6,000 units from its peak the previous evening. Electricity use in winter witnesses its highest usage at just over 45,000 units by 9 pm; whereas, summer’s occurs at both 3 pm and midnight, to reach approximately 20,000 units respectively.

All heating consumes 52% of electricity, with the other three categories of appliances all having roughly the same proportion of electricity usage of between 15% to18%.

- Item to note 组合图小作文写作技巧 -

(1) Notice that for the coherence of the essay, the introduction, the overall statement, the topic order of the essay, and the paragraphing, all follow the order of the charts given. In other words, the seasonal line graph is always first in all of the above areas. 在阅读范文的过程中,仔细观察全文和每一段的行文逻辑,就会发现文章的结构,是按照题目给的图表顺序来的。具体到这篇文章,那就是以第一个图表的内容为主线来展开。

(2) The word ‘with’ is one of the most important preposition-connectors used in task 1, as it gives MORE detailed information about the previous subject. In the overall statement, it used to transition the sentence from ‘the pattern’ to ‘the pie chart’. Remember, the pie chart is a ‘microcosm’ of each day within the year (the measurement of the line graph). 写

任何雅思小作文,"with"这个词,一定一定要学会去用它。 为啥?因为with的后面能带上更多的细节信息。 我在第2段用到了with,从而实现了从图1到图2的顺滑转换。图2展示的是图1的细分信息,每天各类家电用电量的占比。

 

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