雅思作文范文20篇(之六) | 互联网是人类史上最重要的发明吗?

题目

There are many inventions in human history, but some people think that the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2020/10/25)

解析与审题

题材:科技

题型:Discussion

关键词:The Internet + the most important invention

需要讨论的观点:互联网是不是人类历史最重要的发明

建议思路:互联网是很重要的发明,但可能不是最重要的发明。

复现情况:新题

本次考题以前似乎没有出现过,但相信大家对这个话题并不陌生。各位同学还需要关注的是本题的命题方式:...是最好(最重要)的。请看如下真题:

Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2015/2/12)

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2015/11/14)

Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2018/3/24) (点击阅读老雅高分范文)

Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(2019/4/13)(点击阅读老雅高分范文)

这种题型的解答方式一般都是:

1. ......是很好的或者重要的

2. ......不是最好的或者最重要的,因为最好的标准无法确定,或者......还带来一些问题,或者还有更好的或更重要的)

按照这种思路,本题的回答顺序就是:首先讨论互联网是非常重要的发明(这个比较容易,随便写几条互联网给我们生活带来的好处即可,比如方便我们查找和传递信息,拉近人与人之间的物理距离等),然后提出互联网也许不是最重要的发明,它只是提高了我们的工作和交流效率,没有互联网我们依旧可以生活。如果按照重要性来说,文字语言的发明也许才是人类历史上最重要的,因为只有文字语言才让人类与动物区分开来,从此真正步入人类社会。毫无疑问,唐老师这里提供的答案只是众多可能的答案之一,绝非标准答案,大家需要学习的是唐老师的解题思路。

高分范文

As the Internet has become an indispensable part of our life nowadays, many people begin to believe that it is the most important invention ever made by human beings. While the Internet is without doubt one of the greatest inventions in human history, it is perhaps not the single most important one.

The Internet is a great invention in that it makes our life more convenient and our work more efficient. Before the advent of the Internet, for instance, we had to travel a few miles to the post office in order to send a letter to our friends, who then had to wait a few days to receive the letter. But now the Internet enables us to exchange information with our friends in a blink of an eye. In work situations, the Internet is even more useful because it has rendered management, production, distribution, and selling highly efficient and thus has significantly boosted the productivity of the whole society.

Yet we can hardly say that the Internet is THE most important invention in human history, if by “the most important invention” we mean one that is not only ground-breaking but also completely necessary for human beings to exist. Judged from this perspective, the Internet is perhaps not a suitable candidate for “the most important invention”, since, without the Internet, the human world would still be there just as it was in the pre-Internet age. So, instead of the Internet, I would label language as “the most important invention”, because it was the invention of language that ultimately distinguished humans from animals and made possible everything we have now in the human world.

To conclude, the Internet is an invention as great as electricity, solar energy, and the atomic bomb, but if we have to choose “the most important invention” in human history, I would give my vote to that of language.(322 words)

注:蓝色字体标注的是雅思写作高分词汇/词组。

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