雅思大作文7分范文及解析：教导父母减少青少年犯罪

观点类大作文，犯罪类话题

The best way to reduce the crimes by young people is to educate their parents with . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目来源：2017年9月30日亚太雅思大作文

1、题目大意

减少青少年犯罪的最好办法是教导父母提高他们的家长技能，是否同意？

2、思路解析

这是一道观点类大作文，聊得是减少青少年犯罪的最好办法。审题时要注意两点，一是限定对象“reduce the crimes by young people”，讨论的范围限定在减少青少年犯罪上，不涉及别的犯罪类型。二是绝对词“The best way”，一般遇到绝对化表达都是持反对观点。下面，月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看提高父母教育技能的合理性。

一是确实有部分青少年是因为缺少父母的管教，在放任的情况下做出错误的行为甚至违反法律犯规。

二是具备教育技能的家长能够更好地和孩子沟通，为孩子创造一个更好的生长环境，培养他们树立正确的价值观和辨别是非的能力，减少孩子犯罪的可能性。

再来看反对角度，即只关注家长教育并不能解决问题的原因，有三方面。

一是同龄人的影响，青少年通常与同龄人相处的时间更多并且容易受到朋友的行为和态度的影响。如果朋友参与犯罪活动，那导致当事人也跟着做的可能性会增加。

二是社会因素，诸如贫困、教育不足和机会缺乏等社会问题都可能导致青少年犯罪风险增加。生活贫困的人可能难以获得良好的教育和工作机会，进而采用非法手段来满足他们的需求。

三是媒体的误导，年轻人由于自控力和辨别能力较弱，可能会模仿媒体或影视作品中的暴力犯罪内容，如果不加以管控同样会增加犯罪的风险。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

Some people believe there is a connection between crime and the uneducated parents. The majority of crimes committed by young people with ethnic background attach on the lack of parental skills. However, I disagree with the notion.

There are reasons why people consider training parents with parental skills as the best option to reduce juvenile delinquency. First and foremost, it helps to prevent children from falling into a life of crime and allows them to grow up in a healthy environment. Secondly, it allows parents to be more involved in the lives of their children by giving them the tools necessary for success. For example, if a child has a lack of confidence in school, this can lead to poor grades and low self-esteem. If this continues over time, it may cause them to become withdrawn from society or even turn towards crime.

However, rebellious adolescents frequently turn on those closest to them, typically their parents. In order to reduce the number of juvenile delinquents, it is necessary to take further, equally constructive action. Restricting violent content on traditional and social media would be an effective solution. As young and poorly educated individuals have a propensity to imitate whatever they are exposed to, protecting children from violent content would be beneficial. In particular, schools and educators should modify their methods of educating children. In addition to scientific training, there should be a greater emphasis on social skills and moral education. Furthermore, teachers should encourage ethical conduct and discourage aggressive and inappropriate behaviour.

In conclusion, educating parents with parenting skills is essential for minimising juvenile delinquency; nevertheless, other solutions to this problem should also be evaluated.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪

intimate connections 亲密关系

rebellious adolescents   叛逆的青少年

sexual curiosity 性好奇

violent content 暴力内容

moral lessons 道德教育

ethical conduct   道德行为