雅思大作文7分范文及解析：电脑比人类更聪明

双边类大作文，媒体类话题

Some scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people think the development has a positive impact, while others think it is negative. Discuss both views and give your ow opinion.

题目来源：2013年8月29日大陆雅思大作文

1、题目大意

科学家们预测将来电脑会比人类更加聪明。有些人认为这具有积极影响，有些人认为这会是负面的。讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

2、思路解析

这是一道双边类大作文，聊的是电脑比人类更聪明的利弊。双边类大作文，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，最终的结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。审题时需要注意一点，即题目讨论的“电脑比人更聪明”而非单纯的“电脑变得更聪明”，因此论证时需要围绕这个部分展开。这道题目对于当下来说非常应景，ChatGPT出现让大家都开始关注人工智能，下面我们来看下具体观点。

首先来看好处，有两方面。

首先，可以促进科技进一步发展并解决许多人类目前无法解决的问题，比如研究出更好的医疗技术，为病患提供更有效的治疗方案甚至治愈许多现在的绝症；或是能够更好的处理天气和地理环境数据，以达到预测天灾并帮助人类提早防备减少损失。

其次，更强的计算机提供了更多可能性，比如人们或许能上传自己的意识到计算机和网络上，超越物理和身体的限制，体验更多不同的人生。

然后来看坏处，有两方面。

一方面可能带来更大的失业问题，超级智能计算机可能会取代某些岗位甚至工种，导致大量的人员失业，进而对社会造成不利的影响。

另一方面是存在大量的不确定因素。无论是超级计算机出现了错误或故障，还是像末日科幻片那样产生了自我意识并脱离了人类控制，都可能会对人类造成威胁和伤害。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

Technological advancements have demonstrated a compounding effect, wherein each successive development accelerates the creation of increasingly sophisticated technology. Consequently, intriguing debates have arisen concerning the potential benevolence or malevolence of developing artificial intelligence that equals or even surpasses human intellect. In my considered opinion, the arguments put forth by both factions contain elements of veracity.

It can be deduced from historical trends that our quality of life will improve significantly due to advancements in technology, which have become more affordable and accessible. The exponential growth in computing power is anticipated to usher in a utopian era with minimal problems. Advanced technologies, such as nanobots, hold the potential to cure diseases, repair cellular damage, reverse aging, and regulate our metabolism, potentially eliminating the need for strict diets. Moreover, researchers are exploring the possibility of digital consciousness preservation, wherein our minds could be uploaded to a virtual environment, enabling us to exist beyond the limitations of our physical bodies.

Nevertheless, if this trajectory persists, concerns about potential risks stemming from machines surpassing human intelligence appear to be well-founded. As these advanced computers will likely possess the capability to innovate and refine technology, developing new concepts beyond our comprehension, we inevitably cede intellectual dominance to machines. Intelligence begets control; humans prevail in the food chain, not due to physical strength, but rather superior intellect. Consequently, relinquishing our status as the most intelligent beings on Earth could also mean relinquishing control. While the majority of researchers concur that a superintelligent computer is unlikely to exhibit human emotions such as love or hate, and there is no basis to assume artificial intelligence would develop malicious intent, our lack of experience with such an entity that can intentionally or inadvertently outsmart us leaves us on uncertain ground.

In conclusion, augmenting human cognition with artificial intelligence holds the potential to propel human civilization to unprecedented heights, provided we maintain control. Conversely, as computers surpass human capabilities in numerous domains previously considered exclusive to humans, it is imperative to remain cognizant of the practical risks that accompany such advancements.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

In my considered opinion   在我认真考虑之后的看法是...

Elements of veracity   真实性的要素

Ushering in a utopian era   开启一个乌托邦时代

Hold the potential to   具有...的潜力

Beyond the limitations of our physical bodies   超越我们身体的局限性

Concerns about potential risks   对潜在风险的担忧

Stemming from   起源于...

Relinquishing our status   放弃我们的地位

Prevail in the food chain   在食物链上占优势

Malicious intent   恶意意图

Leave us on uncertain ground   让我们处于不确定的地位

Augmenting human cognition   增强人类认知

Propelling human civilization to unprecedented heights   推动人类文明达到前所未有的高度