今天，给大家带来一个G类雅思写作范文。
题目：
In addition to your full-time job, you are taking a 15-hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter:
- Describe your schedule and situation
- Explain why you cannot continue the course
- Say what action you would like to take
审题：
- Type: Semi-formal
- Key words: Describe the schedule and situation/explain why/next action would like
- Model Answer 高分范文-
Dear Mr. Reynolds,
I’m afraid I have some unfortunate news. Due to being over-extended at work, I find myself unable to meet the time demands of the course.
On Mondays in particular, as the distance of the school is some way from my place of work, and as I had over-estimated my capacity for navigating rush hour, Monday has proven to be a hindrance in my study effectiveness, and as my late arrival last Monday shows, an obstacle to arriving timely to class.
I know this is highly unorthodox, but I would like to inquire as to the possibility of only attending Wednesday’s class. Friday is also posing a problem for attending the class as my superior has shifted another task my way in the interim. For homework, perhaps I could check in with one of the students regarding the areas covered in class and the homework assigned.
As I said, I know this is a highly unusual request, and my apologies for having to ask you. If you consider this unworkable, I fully understand, and in that case, I’m afraid I must discontinue the course at present. You are a splendid teacher no doubt!
Thank you,
Stuart Goddard
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
Standard Phrases G类雅思高分句型:
- Dear _____,
- I’m afraid I have some unfortunate news.
- I find myself unable to meet the time demands of…
- my place of work
- I know this highly unorthodox, but I would like to inquire as to the possibility of
- As I said, I know this is a highly unusual request, and my apologies for having to ask you.
- , I fully understand,
- Thank you,
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
- is some way from 离……有点远
- over-estimated 高估了
- my capacity for 能力
- rush hour 高峰期
- hindrance 阻碍
- effectiveness 效率
- obstacle 障碍
- unorthodox 非传统的；不正规的
- the possibility of ……的可能性
- posing a problem 造成了一个问题
- superior 上司
- shifted____ my way 到我头上
- in the interim 在这期间
- covered in class 课上涉及到的
- assigned 布置
- unworkable 行不通的
- discontinue 中断
- splendid 出色的
- no doubt 毫无疑问
Coherence & Cohesion (C&C): 把这些简单的词用好，在"连贯与衔接"方面轻松拿分：
- Due to being
- , I
- On +day+ in particular,
- , as
- , and as I had
- has proven to be
- , and as
- shows
- , an
- timely
- only
- also
- another
- , perhaps I could
- regarding
- As I said,
- If you consider this
- , and in that case,
- at present
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