雅思大作文7分范文及解析：铁饭碗vs工作满意度

双边类大作文，工作类话题

Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe that it is more important to have a permanent job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题目来源：2011年11月19日大陆雅思大作文

1、题目大意

有些人认为，工作满意度比工作保障更重要。其他人则认为，拥有一份永久性的工作更为重要。讨论双方观点并给出你自己的看法。

2、思路解析

这是一道双边类大作文，讨论的是工作铁饭碗和满意度那个更重要，题目非常有现实意义。双边讨论类的题目，可以自由讨论双方各自的利弊，你可以同意某一方观点也可以持中立（都同意或都反对）。审题时需要注意题目中包含比较关系，“job satisfaction” 和 “job security”哪个更重要，在论证过程中需要提及。下面月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看“铁饭碗更重要”的合理性，有两方面。

一方面稳定的工作意味着能给人带来稳定的收入，减少其生活压力和对可能失业产生的恐惧，对于一个需要承担个人和家庭支出成本的人来说，有效的保障无意识更为重要的。

另一方面稳定的工作意味着有更多机会积累工作经验和人脉，即使短期内工作成果不如预期，但是长期来看这些会给个人带来更多升职和发展的机会。

然后再来看“工作满意度”更重要的合理性，可以有三个角度。

一是满意的工作可以带来更多的动力和创造力，当一个人对自己的工作感到满意时，他们往往会更努力地工作，更投入这对职业发展和成功至关重要。

二是当一个人喜欢自己的工作时，更有可能产生积极的情绪，这不仅可以帮助减轻压力和倦怠，还能改善身心健康。

三是虽然稳定的工作提供了保障了收入，但如果一个人长期被困在一份他们不喜欢的工作中，这可能导致无聊、沮丧和缺乏动力，这些负面情绪反而会成为一种负担。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

There are a list of employment criteria in current culture. While some highlight the importance of job satisfaction, others emphasise the value of employment security and sustainability. Nonetheless, I feel that in terms of a satisfying employment, these two perspectives can coexist rather than clash.

Certain individuals  will always demand employment security. First, reality is inevitable, and steady job is required to meet our daily needs. Therefore, stable employment alleviates financial stress, creating a positive balance between work and leisure that allows us to fully appreciate each day. Additionally, a continuous stay in a company makes it easier to receive a promotion. Specifically, extended working durations assist leaders in creating a self-image of reliability and commitment, as well as obtaining additional work experience and forging stronger personal bonds.

For those who place a premium on job fulfilment, however, satisfaction, accomplishments, and the quest of life's meaning are of paramount importance. Those independent artists who live an unpredictable lifestyle, for example, strive for their dreams rather than the steady income. In addition, employees who are satisfied with their jobs tend to be self-motivated and dedicated to their careers.

Nevertheless, sustaining job satisfaction does not imply sacrificing job security, or vice versa. In fact, contentment and sustainability criteria can vary from person to person. For instance, some individuals find satisfaction in educating others; therefore, being a teacher, a very stable vocation, allows them to realise their both goals at the same time.

In conclusion, my viewpoint is that job satisfaction and job security are equally important, and that it is possible to strike a compromise between the two when seeking employment.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

daily expenses   日常花销

well-balanced work and life circle   工作与生活的平衡

promotion   晋升

personal connections   人际关系

the sense of happiness and achievements   幸福感与成就感

self-motivated   有工作激情的