1.28大陆雅思大作文7分范文及解析：去偏远地区旅游的利弊

利弊类大作文，旅游类话题

Organizing tours to remote places and communities is becoming more and more popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment？

题目来源：2023年1月28日大陆雅思大作文（重复2020年4月25日亚太雅思考题）

1、题目大意

组织到偏远地区和社区的旅游正变得越来越流行。这对当地人和环境来说是积极还是消极的发展？

2、思路解析

这是一道利弊类大作文，聊得是偏远地区旅游对于当地的利弊影响。利弊类大作文需要强调在论证上体现合理性，即在具体的分析中，明确能体现出一边的论述的确是大于另一边，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有说服力并不取决于观点的数量，而是内容是否有说服力。审题时注意两点，一是“remote places and communities”，旅游目的地限定在偏远地区，需要考虑当地特性。二是“local people and environment”，利弊讨论需要围绕在当地人和环境上。下面，月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看好处，有两方面。

一是前往偏远地区旅游能促进当地经济发展。大量游客不仅能够直接推动旅游业的发展，还能带动当地交通、酒店住宿、商品销售等相关产业发展，而当地人能够从中获得更多工作机会以及更高的收入。

二是偏远地区旅游能够推增加游客对当地文化和历史的了解，促进人们对当地关注的同时，也有助于保护这些当地特色。

然后来看坏处，可以分成对当地人和环境两个角度来说。

对当地人来讲，大量游客产生的噪音可能会破坏当地人的宁静生活，巨大的人流量也会给当地的交通、餐饮、水电供应等方面带来负担，甚至超过其本身能承受的范围，反而影响到当地人的正常生活。

对于当地环境来说，许多游客的乱丢垃圾或不文明的行为会对自然环境造成破坏。同时，一些原本从事农业相关的当地人发现有更容易赚钱的机会后，也会抛弃原本的工作，进而造成土地荒废等问题。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

Since the beginning of time, primitive men have traveled tremendous distances for food, clothing, and a better habitat. However, tourism in its modern mass form is a phenomenon particular to the twenty-first century, and it frequently signifies the emergence of a large new business that both creates opportunities and becomes a problem for many governments throughout the globe.

Many people have different thoughts about what tourists might offer underdeveloped areas and communities. As one of the major elements of the tertiary economy, tourism initiates a chain of economic indicators, including value-added capital investment, employment, and tax contributions. There are also many who believe that its economic impact is unknown and that the tours frequently upset the locals' daily lives. It is challenging to assess tourism's impact on remote areas and communities because the industries that seem to thrive because of tourism, like food and accommodation, also serve the residents. But visits actually become an issue when the residents find themselves fully occupied by outsiders everywhere; they are upset to see so many strangers in public places, shops, restaurants, or even at their front gates.

However, individuals may readily agree on the deep, detrimental consequences of tourism on local communities' environments, and they worry about the ecological damage caused by a wide range of tourism activities. Once locations, particularly fragile ones, are reconstructed as tourist resorts, conflicts arise between the natural resources and the invasion of modern facilities.  It is evident what individuals would choose to do if they could make more in a few weeks working as porters for tourists than they could in a year labouring in the fields. Likewise, this is considered a possible trigger for desertification.

In conclusion, regardless of how the ecosystem of certain rural locations would be badly impacted by tourism, I would still view it as a positive method to improve the lives of locals. These regions flourish when they are well-known among those who are willing to pay to travel.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Primitive   原始的

habitat   栖息地

signify   预示、表示

economic indicators   经济指标

be upset to   对…感到不安

ecosystem   生态系统