剑10写作7分范文及解析：Test4 博物馆收费的利弊

利弊类大作文，文化类话题

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

题目来源：剑10Test4大作文

1、题目大意

许多博物馆收取门票，而其他博物馆则是免费的。你认为向人们收取博物馆门票的好处多于坏处吗？

2、思路解析

这是一道利弊类大作文，聊的是博物馆参观收费的利弊。利弊类文章需要强调在论证上体现合理性，即在具体的分析中，明确能体现出一边的论述的确是大于另一边，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有说服力并不取决于观点的数量，而是内容是否有说服力。审题时候注意限定观点“charge for admission”，不需要讨论博物馆别的问题，否则属于偏题。下面月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看坏处，有两方面。

一是博物馆收费可能会劝退一部分游客，人们了解当地历史和文化的意愿度变得更少。同时，博物馆作为文化传播的重要部分，游客数量下滑，意味着当地弘扬本土文化的机会变得更少。

二是对那些免费的博物馆产生负面影响。相较于那些免费的博物馆，收费博物馆可能会拥有更强的经济实力并提升自己的吸引力，抢走了免费博物馆的游客，使得后者存在价值降低。

再来看好处，有三方面。

一是博物馆收费有利于缓解政府的财政压力。在免费的情况下，博物馆的人员成本、维护成本高度依赖于政府支出，而通过收费可以补贴一部分支出甚至达到收支平衡。而政府节约下来的钱则可以投入其他需要的领域，比如教育和医疗。

二是博物馆通过收费拥有一定资金后，不仅可以用于改善场馆设施，还可以投入更多新的技术，比如将VR技术与展品相结合，丰富观众的浏览体验，提高自己的新引力。

三是博物馆通过门票收费的模式可以控制参观人数，避免免费情况下游客过多可能产生的问题，比如人数太多导致参观体验不佳，或是防护不足导致藏品遭到损坏。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

While the charging policy of museums would relatively provoke the negative effects on free ones, I would strongly believe that the contributing factors are more outweighing. 

It is not surprising that the new management of some museums via charging for access undoubtedly generates benefits, since the financial burden of the government would initially be released due to the cut down of the budget in this respect, when the tolls would theoretically compensate the costs of the museums relatively. This sort of money could be utilized as, say, the salary of the staff, the maintenance of the structures and infrastructures, or even as the government profits by means of taxes. Great balances between the output and income would be witnessed. 

Besides, the charging policy would also bring about virtuous circle in terms of the development of the heritage sites and historical industries. On the one hand, the money collected would guarantee better exhibits through investing in the decorations, the content, or even in the more exciting forms: some modern technologies such as VR（virtual reality）or computing imagines or videos would be utilized on display. On the other hand, the better presentations would also appeal to more consumers who are interested in these involvements. 

Admittedly，there emerges an awareness that the charging ones would somewhat blight the management of those free museums, since they lack the ample money to make enough refurbishments, which therefore provokes a less popularity compared with the tolling counterparts. Whereas it is suggested that the competitiveness would be whittled down through differentiating the topics of exhibits between museums, to attract trips with diverse tastes. 

In a word, never can the positive effects of the commercialization of some museums be ignored, and there are reasonable ways for relieving the pressures on the free ones during the process.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Financial burden  财政负担，经济负担

Theoretically  理论上

Compensate  补偿 ; 弥补

Maintenance  维修 ; 维护

Infrastructure  基础设施，基础建设

Heritage site  遗址

Decoration  装饰 ; 装饰品

Counterpart  对应物

Whittle down  逐渐减少

Commercialization  商业化；商品化