双边类大作文，健康类话题
Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
题目来源：2022年8月27日大陆雅思大作文（重复2017年3月18日亚太考题）
1、题目大意
一些人认为政府应该禁止危险运动，而其他人认为人们应该有自由去选择他们想要的运动。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。
2、思路解析
这是一道双边类大作文，聊的是危险运动应该被禁止还是自由选择。双边类的题目，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，最终的结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。这道题目在2021年的第399篇中给出过范文和解析，当时范文给的是双反角度，（感兴趣的同学可以点击链接查看：）今天的范文是支持后者的角度，下面月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。
首先来看第一个观点，政府是否应该禁止。
政府有责任保障人们的身体健康和安全，而危险运动由于其特殊性使得参与者更容易受到伤害，这些额外的伤病会一定程度上增加社会的医疗负担以及给周围人带来负面情绪影响，因此政府需要禁止或者进行一定程度上的限制。
但是完全禁止有两个反驳点。
一是Dangerous sports 是一个主观和模糊的定义，缺乏客观和具体的参照标准，比如赛车、斗牛、格斗这些究竟算不算，运动多多少少都会有危险性，在缺乏客观标准的前提下禁止并不合理。
二是政府要禁止危险运动主要是因为这个运动可能会对参与者造成伤害。那我们来看为什么会造成伤害，一方面一些运动需要经过专业训练否则容易受伤，另一方面有些运动组织过程中出现规则制定不完善、安全防护标准不明确等问题，增加了参与者的危险性。找到了原因后我们来看这些问题是否可以解决。其实是可以的，针对第一点我们可要求参与者必须参加过专业训练甚至考核，针对第二点我们可以制定更好地规则和预案，给运动员提供更多的保护，让运动的安全性更高。
然后我们再来看另一方的观点，人们是否能自由选择。
合理的点在于人作为一个独立的个体，他们有权利选择去完成自己想要做的事情，哪怕危险运动有风险这也是他们自己所承担而不是其他人。并且一些极限运动能带给人平常所无法感受到的刺激体验以及不一样的风景，因此他们愿意去尝试并认为这对他们生活有益。
而反驳点在于，给予一个人绝对的自由并不合理，这里的运动也没有给出具体说明。一方面许多运动都需要专业训练和保护，缺乏专业能力的人参加会增加自身和别人的危险，并且可能会增加额外的社会成本，比如搜救的人力和费用成本。另一方面，许多运动本身也具有除了危险性外的争议，比如斗牛在动物保护范畴就具有争议性。
3、提纲
4、高分范文示例
Recently, there has been an upsurge in the number of office workers who engage in outdoor sports such as rock climbing, mountain biking, and scuba diving. This trend is most prevalent among younger, more energetic workers. Therefore, there are those who argue that the government should prohibit these activities, while others argue that individuals should be allowed to pursue their own interests. I personally find the second proposition to be more appealing.
Due to the exhilaration that can be derived from risky hobbies like hang gliding and mountain climbing, many individuals are willing to put their lives at risk to participate. It is likely that people do this in order to escape their sedentary lifestyle and engage in more exciting activities. By challenging the limits of their minds and bodies, they gain insight into the meaning of their lives, which contributes to their life advancement.
Moreover, owing to notable technological advancements and stricter government regulations, individuals can now actively participate in dangerous sports without endangering their lives. The majority of risky activities, such as scuba diving, are supported by theory and utilise cutting-edge technology. Before engaging in the activity, participants are required to receive expert instruction on how to use the required equipment and observe all safety precautions. When trying out activities that could be dangerous, participants will always have the support and guidance of instructors.
People would argue that participation in risky sports increases the likelihood of suffering an injury. Due to the physical preparation required for high-risk sports, participants with a history of mental illness or encephalopathy may put their health at risk. However, tragic occurrences can always be avoided if players take care of their own health and if organisations maintain their facilities appropriately.
In conclusion, Due to the thrill these activities provide and the safety precautions in place, I am confident that participation in dangerous sports should be permitted.
5、相关词汇和语法结构
Gliding 滑翔
Physique 体格
monotonous 单一的
Sedentary 久坐的
Conducive 有助于
Perilous 危险的
Precautions 注意事项
Hazardous 危险的
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