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今 日 考 题
Task 1: Bar chart(动态柱图)
Task 2:If you want to be successful at work, you should have high-level computer skills, do you agree or disagree?
点评:话题熟悉,但如果只是推理性论述,非常容易写的假大空。所以这个文章在写作时最好是多举例,增加细节。
参考范文(8分!只是可能的答案中的一种)强调:因为今天上课到非常晚,没有时间和精力原创范文。
以下文章非本人完全原创,是本人在AI的帮助先快速完成的。
In today’s digital world, computer literacy is becoming increasingly important. While I agree that high-level computer skills should be seen as a key advantage in many careers, but I would not consider them a universal requirement for success.Good computer skills can contribute to success at work for two main reasons.First, in office-based or technical roles, employees with strong digital abilities—such as data analysis or advanced software use—can complete tasks more efficiently, which enhances their overall performance. Second, in competitive industries like finance, engineering, and marketing, high-level computer competence often gives applicants an edge in hiring or promotion. In these fields, digital fluency is not just helpful but often expected, and mastering relevant tools can be a key step toward long-term career success.However, not all professions depend on high-level computer expertise.In fields like education and healthcare, success often hinges more on interpersonal skills and real-world experience. For instance, in education, building trust and maintaining strong relationships with students is crucial for success. A teacher’s effectiveness largely depends on their ability to communicate and engage with students, rather than relying on digital tools. Similarly, in healthcare, a nurse's or doctor’s success is primarily determined by their empathy, care, and hands-on expertise, not advanced computer skills. These human-centered qualities are essential in achieving professional success and delivering high-quality care.In conclusion, while high-level computer skills are beneficial in many fields, success in many professions does not necessarily require them. Instead, qualities like communication, empathy, and hands-on experience can play a more significant role in achieving career success。