今天推送的是4月12日·托福·考题分析.以下思路和范文仅供同学们学习·参考。
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Dr. Achebe:
With so many opportunities to connect nowadays, some people believe that no matter which country we come from, we have more similarities than we have differences. However, others have observed that differences between themselves and people from other countries are growing. In your view, are differences between people from different countries increasing, or are they diminishing? Why?
Andrew：
I think the differences among us are decreasing as our exposure to products from other countries grows. We can enjoy food from any country. We can watch movies made in far away places. We can go to a store and buy authentic goods from around the world. These things become part of our normal life and make our differences seem smaller.
Kelly：
I understand what Andrew is saying, but for some people, being exposed to differences makes them retreat into their own corner even more. Look at social media. We are exposed to many different people and ideas, but a lot of people talk to only those they agree with and ignore the rest. This only makes the differences between people increase.
(1). 这道题重复了23年11月11日的考题。
(2) 具体分析：
1. “现在不同国家人之间的差异越来越小了”：这是一个现象。不管大家选择同意 还是 不同意，都需要分析原因。
2.“不同国家之间的人”：比如美国人和中国人等。这种因为国家，历史，文化，宗教，社会等等引起有差异的不同国家的人。
3. “差异”：“差异”可能有很多种，大家尽量选取自己比较熟悉的/有过积累的内容。比如：对待科技，时尚穿着，饮食健康生活方式，教育，娱乐…….或者，利用Andrew的分析，在购物方面； Kelly：观点和想法方面。
4. 结合上面的分析，可行的分论点就很好分析。或者结合写作团里提供的常用分析题目的9大角度，也能找到好写的论点：
同意差异越来越小：
--现在网络媒体等很发达，已经覆盖全球，所以人们都能接受到来自全球各个地方的信息。所以相互理解，相互学习越来越多。比如，在穿着上，中国，日本等传统的国家都像英国，美国人一样穿西服。在饮食上，美国人也像意大利人一样吃披萨。在娱乐上，全世界的年轻人都喜欢用tiktok 来展示自己的生活。
--因为现在越来越多的国家都重视教育了。比如即便是在比较贫穷的非洲，大部分国家都建立了完善的义务教育。所以，年轻的一代都同等地接受了现在文明和科技。所以人们的观念上的差距越来越小。比如，在传统国家比如印度也像美国一样修建了很多高楼天大厦，创立了先进的大学，提升了一些女性的地位。
--因为全球化的影响，越来越多的人会去不同的国家旅游，学习，工作经商。所以随着大家相互之间的联系和理解越来越多，所以差异也越来越少。
👩🏻🏫：老师暂时还没想到差异变大的好写的理由。想到的都是：现在去全球化/国家之间的利益矛盾差距，导致相互仇恨./ 为了保护国家之间的传统... 这些观点都很不好展开。所以不推荐大家写。
参考范文:
I concur that globalization and modern technology arenarrowing the gapbetween countries.The advent of the internet has transformed the world intoa global village,where people fromremote corners of the globecan easily access a wealth of information and share their daily experiences on platformslike TikTok, Facebook, and Twitter.This constant exchange of cultural practices and ideas fosters a deeper understanding ofdiverse lifestyles, traditions, and beliefs,significantly reducing misconceptions and cultural differences.
For instance, fashion trends demonstrate this cultural convergence. Today, individuals in traditionally conservative societies like China and Japan often adopt Western styles, donning suits, jeans, and sneakers.Similarly,culinary preferences have evolved globally.Pizza, once a regional Italian dish, has become a beloved meal across various cultures.Furthermore, TikTok's universal appeal amongthe youth exemplifies how entertainment transcends geographical boundaries, uniting users worldwide in shared interests and experiences.
In essence, the proliferation of social media and digital platforms has played a pivotal role in bridging the cultural divide,demonstrating that despite our diverse backgrounds, we share more similarities than differences. (178字）
第2套
难度：中等
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审题注意点:(1). 这道题重复了24年1月20日的原题。也命中了写作团175期前团里day9的作业原题。只是因为特朗普上台后极力制止多元文化，导致我在176期后就替换了这道题。又一个讨厌特朗普的理由🤣
很符合美国这个移民国家的现实, 但是对我们中国同学来说，可能就有些难以relate。很多同学都没有工作过，更别说遇到不同文化背景的人了。所以老师建议大家平时在备考的时候，看一些美剧/关注一些美国新闻，了解美国的主流文化，对自己分析托福问题还是有一定帮助的。比如，医疗剧《实习医生格雷》 律政剧《傲骨之战》，电影《实习生》(不小心暴露年龄了)…里面肯定都起码有一个少数族裔.
(2) 可行的分论点。这个题目大家不熟，可以借鉴其他2位同学的观点
--好处：
1. 有利于工作产品更符合市场的需求。不同背景的员工可以提供不同的insights, 满足客户的不同需求。以我自己的工作经历为例。我们在设计一款新的电脑的时候，大部分男性产品经理都关心的是产品的性能是否强劲，系统运行是否快速。但是其中一位女性经理提到电脑的重量问题，因为如果太重了就不方便很多要出差人士携带，即使性能很好，尤其是职业女性。这个想法一下子就获得了很多人的赞同。因此我们推出了新一代轻便的电脑迅速风靡了市场 (take the market by storm)。
2 可以让员工工作更轻松。因为职场员工越多元，就越少人感觉自己是少数群体，大家就越平等，越轻松。比如我在一个非常多元的公司工作，我的同事有来自不同地区，比如中国和美国，不同年龄段的，有刚毕业的也有工作很多年的 和刚刚毕业的，因此大家都能平等相处，尊重彼此的习俗。比如我们在中国传统春节，新年， 年轻人喜欢的情人节都会放假…
--坏处：
误会多，降低工作效率。比如因为背景不一样，可能无意中会冒犯到彼此的习俗和传统。甚至在工作中会导致争吵。
参考范文:
Echoing Clair’s perspective, Ifirmly advocate the benefits of a diverse workforce.The primary reason is that employees from diverse backgrounds can offer a range of insights, better catering to the varied needs of customers.One of my work experiences serves as a compelling example.
In designing a new generation of computers, the focus was predominantly on system functionality, with the aim of creating the market's fastest computer. However, a young female manager highlighted the need for portability. She noted that most business professionals, particularly businesswomen, prefer computers that are lightweight and compact for easy transport. This idea was immediately embraced by the board and became a game-changing concept. Our newly released computers took the global market by storm. Had our company not embraced workforce diversity, focusing only on traditional demographics, such a groundbreaking idea might never have emerged, nor would we have achieved such remarkable success.
In sum, fostering a diverse workforce is crucial for companies pursuing innovation and market leadership, highlighting diversity's role not only in promoting inclusivity but also in driving significant business advancements.(177字)
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审题注意点:不知道是不是今天大风，考试的人特别少，老师还没有收集到第3套题目。欢迎同学们在下方留言补充收集到题目后，我会第一时间在公众来给大家分析+范文。
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