2月8日雅思小作文8分范文 动态柱状图 4个描述对象 如何分段写作

柱状图

The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

1、题目大意

柱状图显示了参观伦敦不同博物馆的人数。通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息，并在相关情况下进行比较。

2、高分范文示例

开始段 - 改写题目+总结

The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors to four different types of museums in London from June to October. Overall, the British Museum attracted the highest number of visitors, while the National Museum had the lowest attendance during this period. Notably, the majority of visitors visited the museums in August.

第一段 - 描述前三个月变化

In June and July, the monthly visitor numbers showed little variation across the four museums. The HistoryMuseum, British Museum, and Science Museum all had slightly over 400,000 visitors, while the National Museum had only about half that number, around 200,000. In August, there was a marked increase in the number of visitors to the History, British, and National Museums, reaching their peak numbers. The British Museum exceeded 700,000 visitors, while the HistoryMuseum had 600,000 and the National Museum saw 300,000.

第二段 - 描述后两个月变化

In September, the Science Museum saw a notable rise in visitor numbers compared to the previous months, reaching a peak of around 500,000, while the attendance at the other three museums declined significantly. Finally, in October, the visitor numbers continued to decrease across all four museums. The HistoryMuseum, National Museum, and Science Museum all reached their lowest figures during the five-month period, with approximately 250,000, 180,000, and 300,000 visitors respectively.

柱状图必备语料

visitor numbers 游客人数

attracted the highest number 吸引了最多的游客

reached a peak 达到顶峰

saw a marked increase 看到明显增加

showed little variation 变化不大

had slightly over 略高于

reached their lowest figures 达到最低数值

a notable rise 显著上升

declined significantly 显著下降

during this period 在此期间