11月23日雅思真题解析及高分范文

Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

【解析】

首先,如何理解这个 educational qualifications?其实这就是“学历”的意思,也大约相当于我们平常所说的“文凭”。

那么,学历与成功有何关系?学历总是(always)能带来成功吗?

这个话题,我们太熟悉了。相信大家的观点都是:学历对于成功很重要,但学历并不是成功的保证。用逻辑话语来说就是,学历是成功的必要(necessary)条件,但不是充分(sufficient)条件。

本作文建议结构:

引入:

今天越来越多的人愿意为高学历付出金钱和时间,但我认为,学历虽然对人生的成功很重要,但远非成功的充分条件。

学历对于成功为什么必要呢?

---学历意味着专业知识(expertise)

---学历意味着分析问题解决问题的能力

一个人要想成功,这些都是极其需要的。

那么,学历对于成功为什么不是充分的呢?

--- 成功的要素里,还有人际关系(interpersonal relationship, social networking, E.Q....),以及坚持不懈的精神(persistence, hard-work),甚至还需要一些运气(luck)

---因此,学历只是成功的一个要素,不一定会带来成功。

---事实上,我们也见过很多高学历的人,因为种种原因在生活中处处碰壁,过了一个失败而郁闷的人生。

自己的观点:

一般说来,学历与成功之间是正相关的(positively correlated),即学历越高,就越容易成功;但成功还需要其他很多学历之外的因素(比如性格和运气),因此高学历并不一定意味着人生会成功。

【高分范文】

Nowadays, more and more people are willing to spend money and time on educational qualifications such as a master degree or even a doctoral degree. To my mind, however, educational qualification is at most a necessary condition, rather than a sufficient one, for success in our life.

Needless to say, educational qualifications may mean a lot to our success in life. In the first place, they are always required in order for us to find our dream jobs. A university teaching position, for instance, requires the candidates to have obtained their doctoral degree, without which there would be no interview no matter how suitable they may be for the position. Besides, educational qualifications also mean that the owners have had the expertise and the ability to work out problems in a specialized field. All these are essential if we want to succeed in life.

However, our success entails much more than educational qualifications alone. To succeed, we have to know how to cooperate with others and how to lead a team towards a common goal. Besides interpersonal relationship, social networking, and the ability to inspire our team members, we also need to know the value of persistence and hard work, and sometimes even luck.

Therefore, educational qualifications alone are not sufficient for success. In fact, we have seen many people with high educational qualifications whose life turns out to be a complete failure for one reason or another. My conclusion, then, is that, even though there is a certain positive co-relation between them, educational qualifications do not necessarily lead to a successful life, for success involves many factors other than educational qualifications.

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